"What is your attitude towards and relationship with Jagex like? Addendum: Ah, yes, and you may be interested to know that I forced a certain noted intellectual of my acquaintance to read your novel. Addendum #2: Following your request, you may be interested to know that having read the revised first chapter, I personally find it to be an improvement upon your original work - Something that I can state with the utmost honesty that I did not think possible."
It's a very good one and I suppose informal and friendly would class our working arrangement appropriately out of the options you specified.
I am also very glad to hear you thought the new edition is improved on the first - that is encouraging.
I am intrigued to know who this intellectual of note is however? Any chance of an endorsement?
"why you focused on Asgarnia so much,but you excluded Port Sarim and Rimmington?"
Good point. Rimmington got a mention as Theodore and Castimir's place of birth and childhood but the port was not mentioned. The truth is there is a world out there that is waiting to be explored in future novels so I couldn't get everything into the first novel.