Thread closed as it really doesn't have that much here that is a suggestion.
If you feel it has potential, then you should explain that potential. Rather than give a section that 'needs work', explain how you would rework it. There really isn't much of a 'suggestion' here that can be discussed as 'do this' doesn't provide much context.
- Last edited on 13-May-2019 02:49:47 by Applejuiceaj