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ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

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Hey , and thanks for taking the time to read my story, I hope you enjoy it a lot!
For those of you who want to get to the story right away, it begins on page 2.You may post that you hate or dislike my story, but please specify why and don't be offended if I challenge your statements. Thanks.
All reserves are done, feel free to post!
"The sad thing with the story forum, is that people stick to their own stories and rarely check other people's unless they are their friend's story. This is the sad truth. Readers are scarce, count any that read your stories as rare diamonds." -Ruben Luc
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If you like this story check out:
Elven Beginnings
49-50-994-59467279- By Ruben Luc
Realms of Mirrors
49-50-58-59456141-By Caydock
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It is a guild for authors, we give tips reviews, and encourage authors in their writings. If you wish to join, go to 49-50-189-59772000.
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04-Feb-2010 18:02:39 - Last edited on 08-Feb-2010 14:40:35 by ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

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Table of Content:
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Page1
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Post 1: Intro
Post 2: Table of Contents
Post 3: Rules/ Help
Post 4: Background
Post 5: Comments
Post 6: Reader and Helper List /People who can Bump
Post 7: Character Guide
Post 8: About the Author
Post 9: Review
Post 10: Review
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Page2
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Post 11: Reserved
Post 12: Chapter 1
Post 13: Continue of Chapter 1

04-Feb-2010 18:03:15 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2010 18:25:21 by ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

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Rules aren't fun, I know. But these are to insure that everyone has a good time reading the story. So please follow them.

Rules:

0: All Jagex rules applied.

I: No flaming.

II: No Spamming.

III: If you see an error, please don't hesitate to tell me. I won't take it personally.

IV: Any feedback is welcome!
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I personally think that it is always useful to put threads that might help other people on my thread. So here they are:

103-104-1-58567976- If you need help on the forums
103-104-14-58962070 - To change title or lock a thread.
103-104-3-58567982- To ask Mods to review a ban put on your account.
133-134-368-59522163- To talk to a Jmod in-game
133-134-20-58812834: Profiles of Jmods
135-136-12-59386128: For help if you are clan leader.

04-Feb-2010 18:05:07 - Last edited on 25-Sep-2014 19:00:42 by ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

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Comments:
Really good so far, Ruben. I really liked the description and the elf seems like a promising character. --iTz BeAsTn
Despite the odd forgotten letter or slight grammar mistake here or there (very common ones; I myself likely make 'em constantly) it appears to be a well-thought-out, suspenseful story...with high potential.
To say the least.--Nightmare7-6
I like it! Great job, buddy! Keep writing! You obviously know how to. ~Caydock

04-Feb-2010 18:05:53 - Last edited on 08-Feb-2010 14:49:57 by ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

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Reader/Helper List:
iTz BeAsTn
Nightmare7-6
Caydock/IkranMakto
Lobster8338

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Thanks to:
Caydock for being awesome ;)
A Wh1te Wolf for reviewing my story.
David for helping with corrections.
RichGodFrodo for supporting this story.

04-Feb-2010 18:06:18 - Last edited on 18-Feb-2010 14:09:15 by ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

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About the Author:
My name is Ruben. I use to write a lot, but stopped and lost my touch with writing, this is my second Runescape related story I wrote.I am trying to improve my writing skills again and reach the writing level I use to be at.
English is the third language I learned, so if some expressions are wrong or I made spelling mistakes, please report them, thanks.
Thanks and enjoy the story

04-Feb-2010 18:07:43

ReaperáBen

ReaperáBen

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Reviews of my story:
You have some good descriptions and considering English is your third language, you should be very proud of your prowess. English is a difficult language with many subtle nuances.
Unfortunately though, the description wasn't engaging enough and the sentence structure too basic for my taste. I didn't feel immersed in the story, more as if I was reading a journalist's stark account of a crime that had happened. ----- A Wh1te Wolf

04-Feb-2010 18:08:10 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2010 18:24:08 by ReaperáBen

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